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The story of Dakkar

685 years ago the planet: Matera, the country: Delion, the state: capital Gaakarc.
The Court hearing of wanted assassin Dakkar in the senate chamber. Dakkar the deadliest assassin in the 15 countries of the planet wanted in all of them. "If that snitch Tudelo didn't tell the cops where I was I would be doing hits right now, not going to escape now I wanna hear my stats.”, thought the assassin while in the specially made cage for him, while locked in over 2 tons of chains he lifted his head and stared at the over 430 senators about to condemn him to centuries of imprisonment.
The head councilman stood and s

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Dakkar part 10The henchman led Dakkar to his landing craft and piloted it up to Asorle's ship in orbit. When Dakkar got off the landing craft he heard a squeal, felt an impact around his neck, legs going around his waist, and a tongue go inside his mouth. It was so overwhelming that he didn't know whether or not to throw her to the ground or to keep on with the kiss.

With Dakkar gasping for air, he heard the familiar voice of his former captor Asorle whispering in his ear, "I can't believe that you're here, and now you are, I won't let you leave and tonight I'm going to rock your world."

Dakkar unwrapped her legs from around him Dakkar part 10
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Dakkar Part 9Part 9: Landing site of Unknown Planet
The SpitFire landed on the suspicious planet giving off an abnormal vibe to it. Dakkar stepped out of the ship with his gun ready. Enchana slowly stepped out of the ship with her swords at hand. Etrin was still on the SpitFire running test and fixing the ship with the supplies already at hand.

Dakkar and Enchana agreed that it would be best if they don't split up unless the situation was life threatening in which Dakkar would stay behind. The pair started to trek the seemingly forest covered planet, with animal calls coming from every direction; they became more alert and suspi Dakkar Part 9
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Dakkar Part 8Part 8: Aboard the SpitFire Bang, Bang, Bang the sound had resonated around the whole ship as Tudelo was installing a secret weapon for quick escape from the police. Enchana was in the simulation room perfecting her aim and sword technique. Dakkar was constructing a new type of ammo for his gun still ‘Untitled’ as he puts it which is a synonym for its highly volatile and extremely dangerous for anyone’s well being.
Then there was a rumble on the side of the left side of the ship. The trio thought they one of them somehow screwed up their concentration and did something dangerous enough to shake t Dakkar Part 8
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Dakkar: Elite Killer part 2Martack was exercising in his home gym when he heard a scream coming from the streets. He looked out of the window and seen three thugs robbing a woman at gun point. Martack jumped out of his open window to land right in between the mugging with a sword in hand.
Not hesitating for a second he used the hilt of the sword to bang the gun out of the mugger’s hand and subdued them without killing them. After was all said and done he found out that the woman he saved was an ambassador from Tryiona , a neighboring country, she called the president of Tryiona to tell her of Martack’s heroics and set up a meeting for him to meet up wi Dakkar: Elite Killer part 2
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change in style

Fri May 22, 2009, 9:31 PM

ok i was reading Dakkar in completion (up to Elite Killer) and i noticed that its kinda hard for me to write in the same style i had before but im trying to....idk if its that im getting better in my writing or what but im going to keep adding more parts to the story as planned

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